Tuesday

 Today, if anyone is ready and wants to get their presentation over with, I will take volunteers. Afterwards I will give those of you who are not done until tomorrow to work on essays and presentations. If you are done and want to practice your delivery today, you can do that as well.

The presentation can include or should include 1) A hook, 2) an overview of what you learned reading the book, 3) a overview of what you wrote your essays on, 4) a visual aid, and 5) a conclusion.

You should put your presentation on note cards.  You could also do your presentation as a PPT.

5) THE PRESENTATION:  3 minutes—this should be an overview of your project and what you learned.  It should include a visual aid. 

Scoring Rubric for Presentation:

4 – Presentation is more than 3 minutes and contains more than 1 visual.  Presentation offers analysis on the book and an evaluation on the student’s learning.

3 – Presentation is at least 3 minutes and contains at least 1 visual aid.  Presentation offers insight on the student learning.

2 – Presentation is less than 3 minutes, could be missing a visual aid and/or might not offer insight into the student’s learning.

1 – Presentation is very short, could be missing a visual aid (or visual aid is most of the presentation), and/or fails to offer any insight into the student’s learning.

ORAL RUBRIC

Criteria	Exceeds Standard (4)	Meets Standard (3)	Needs Improvement (2)
Volume: How well you can be heard	Voice is loud and clear without the student yelling.  All words are heard.  Student projects words from their diaphragm.	Voice is loud throughout most of presentation.  One or more words might be lost because of projection of volume, but the idea is still clear.	Voice fades in places so that the listener loses or misses parts of the presentation, or parts of the idea
Pronunciation: How well you say all your words	Words are pronounced perfectly and sentences flow off of tongue	The speaker trips in one or two places either in the pronunciation of a word or in reading a sentence.  The presentation is effected only slightly by the mistakes.	The speaker trips in quite a few places.  The presentation is effected more than slightly by the mistakes.   Mistakes either make the presentation hard to listen to or cloud the ideas of the writing
Tone: Do you vary how you say your sentences	Speaker as Actor:  The speaker’s delivery makes the writing come alive by giving it emotion, character, emphasis, by breathing life into it	Speaker varies most of sentences to express emotion or to emphasis importance of parts, but there are still places when the speaker spoke in a lifeless monotone	Speaker speaks in a monotone that reveals no emotion or does not emphasis any importance on any idea
UHMS or AHS	NONE	1 or 2 but the uhms or ahs do not distract the presentation	3 or more uhms or ahs
Eye Contact: do you look at your audience	The speaker made a point to look at everyone in the room and rarely looked as if they were reading from a paper	Some eye contact is made, but mostly the presenter read off of his or her paper	Little or no eye contact.

 

GRADING SCALE for Book Review/Personal Response:

4 – Book Review reads like a “real book” review but with a personal twist.  Summary is detailed but condensed.  Personal insight into why someone should read this novel.  Insight includes analysis and textual evidence, very few grammar errors in the writing. 

3 – Summary is detailed and condensed.  Personal insight into why someone should read the novel included.  Review might contain some grammar errors but they do not inhibit readability.

2 – Summary included, but could be overtly long or extremely short.  Personal insight into why someone should read the novel might be missing.  Review could contain multiple grammar errors that distracts the reader and/or affects readability.

1 – Brief reference to task. 

3) THE LITERARY ANALYSIS: Choose one literary element of the book and develop a thesis around it.  Back up your thesis statements with proof from the text.  This paper should be at least 3 pages.

Analysis Rubric:

FOCUS (Claims, set-up)	Hook, Thesis Statement, Order of development connects to an n overarching idea of the novel.  Thesis is manageable..  Hook and thesis are connected by idea.   Hook is witty or insightful.	Hook, Thesis Statement is present in the first paragraph. Hook and thesis are connected by idea.  Order of development is present.	There is a thesis statement but either it is not clear, or the order of development and/or hook is missing.	No thesis statement
Examples and Analysis	At least five pieces of evidence from novel.  Evidence is either direct quotation or paraphrases with page # citation.  Commentary explains relationship between evidence and thesis.	4-5 pieces of evidence.  Evidence is either direct quotations or paraphrases with page # citation.  Provides commentary on evidence; however commentary.  Relationship between evidence and thesis may not be thoroughly developed.	3-4 pieces of evidence.  Evidence maybe mere summary w/o connection to the thesis.  Or there are vague references to the text.  References could be vaguely relevant to thesis.  Little or no commentary (analysis).	No Analysis or examples or examples are unclear.  Repeats information already provide or simply restates the thesis as evidence.
Sophistication of Writing	Point of view is evident.  Clear sense of audience.  Ideas are original.  Work is engaging.  Precise, fresh and original words. Sentence variety.  Effective use of rhetorical devices such as parallelism or figurative language.	A sense of audience.  Conveys ideas to reader.  Use of rhetorical devices.  Engaging vocabulary.	Paper lacks energy.  Essay lacks focus and/or doesn’t persuade.  Language relies on repetition of the same words or there is an overuse of “to be” verbs.	Voice is not apparent, or doesn’t necessary seem that of the author.
Mechanics	One to three small mistakes	Three to five small mistakes that do not affect the reading of the essay	Five to ten mistakes	Numerous mistakes that impair reading

4) THE CONNECTION: 1-2 pages connecting the novel to a short story read in class.  You may focus on theme, characterization (think dynamic), or figurative language.

RUBRIC For Connection/Comparison Essay

	4	3	2	1
Thesis Statement	Clear and defendable thesis, hook and order of development connect with thesis	Defendable thesis, hook present	Thesis statement attempted, but might be clunky, wordy, or unclear	No thesis
Evidence	2 pieces of evidence for each point; evidence is analyzed and makes connections between the evidence and the thesis	Two pieces of evidence for each point; some analysis is made between the evidence and thesis but it might be taken out of context, misinterpreted or oversimplified	Evidence form at least two sources.  No analysis is made between the evidence and the thesis.	Body paragraphs either simply restate the thesis or the evidence is unclear or unrelated to the prompt, or less than two sources are provided.
Sophistication of Writing	Effective paragraph structures, high level vocabulary, vivid writing, varied sentence structures and effective rhetorical choices	Some high level vocabulary and some variety of sentence structures.  Some effective rhetorical strategies.	Essay use same words over and over again.  Sentences are wordy and/or clunky.	Student makes sweeping generalizations or comparisons that are oversimplified.  Very little variety in word choice and sentence structure.